Updated drafts “How's I Such a Fool” and “Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine” #lorijean #songs #updates








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I've been working on my next releases. I still have “You Didn't Even Want Our Baby” album in progress. Please don't think I'm forgetting about that. As a matter of fact, “How's I Such a Fool” is one of the songs on the album, and one of my favorites. I ended up picking this one to work on next as well as the single Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine, which was inspired by Five for Fighting's “She's My Girl,” because I found “My Best Country Song” didn't have strong enough lyrics. I really feel that this is imperative in a song. Even if the music is good, I think great lyrics are very much needed. The order, the story, and the way you want the audience to perceive it. I hope you like the updates. I will be getting a focus rite for my computer. It sounds a bit poopy now, but I know your used to my style and can appreciate my work at any stage. Thanks!!! Mwah!!! Love ya!!

P.S. Also, I have a BEAUTIFUL jade green gown for my red carpet award celebration in April. Wish I could see you there. It goes great with my eyes and shows my bust nice. It's a bit long but if I wear slightly uncomfortable heels that have boot effect and a bigger heel and braids I'll make the PART for “Is It the Time!!!” Haven't figured out what I'll do with my purse of casual outfit or dress bag before the celebration. I'm hoping to get a hotel room to store it all. Not sure what time the show will start for this. I was going to fly in right before. Maybe I'll bring a small purse and fly in my gown – buy a cheap pair of pants and shirt afterwards??!!!

Also, check out my “Ashes on My Cup” video if you haven't already seen it.





How's I Such a Fool
by Lori Jean Finnila

Verse
That first night in the field
Under the moonlight
Van Morrison was playing our song

Chorus
How's I such a fool
When you crashed me to the ground
With the words I love you
still in my head
While I was being thrown

Verse
But then your bike crashed
me to the ground
it started out on our first date
on a horse
the bike man at the store
saw me panting as you gave
me a push to get back on for more

Chorus

Verse
The second time around
It came from a car
Though I took the spin with my neck
You took the money for whiplash

Bridge
You fell on your knees to me
as I was put upon a thrown
The ring you gave me
shown through the entire night

Chorus


doo doo da doo da doo da
repeat

doo doo da doo da doo da




Under the Moonlight with a Bottle of Wine
by Lori Jean Finila

Verse
You've found your wet dreams
when you think of me
You call me on the phone
remembering our song
the one we never had

Chorus
I was told to love Valentino
Live like Cinderella
Under the moonlight
with a bottle of wine

Verse
You fell on your knees to me
As I was put upon a thrown to all beings
The ring you gave me
shown through the entire night

Bridge
Drifting lovely like a fall
I made the completion
to it all

You say,
“Flower still,
be still inside of me,
under the sheets,
in the chair,
cornered everywhere.”

Six lines shaped like church organ pipes
shine shadows on my breasts at night
The dips point to the corners in me
where you shine most gently

Chorus
I was told to love Valentino
Live like Cinderella
Under the moonlight

with a bottle of wine

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